The different between narration and descriptive writing is the narration is a story recounts events, or outlines the stages of a processor thus, when one tells or renders an experience or several experiences as they are remembered recollected in memory, he/she is narrating. but the descriptive is a story that paint the scene of a story, the appearance or character of the people did or describing the main character of the story.
3. How do you as a writer make your language descriptive? How do you add depth and
texture to a piece of writing?
as i am a writer i make my language descriptive by arranging my details from easier to hardest and add some unlocking difficulties words so that the reader can't say that it was so simple story.
" TREASURE"
WHAT IS REAL TREASURE WE HAVE IN OUR LIFE? Long time ago there was two boys who was wandering of the word "treasure" the boy 1 name Jake and the boy two name Mike. Jake is from Iligan city while Mike from Cagayan Valley this two boys really wanting to know what is a good treasure that can stay forever. They got some information about about treasure in internet, in the people around them and also in the television.And the information they install in their mind is that treasure can made them popular and rich and they heard that their are lots of treasure they can found in the Mount Apo the tallest mountain in the Philippines that found in Davao City. Jake who came from Iligan City was the first to arrived in the mountain he was alone and starts searching the treasure he wants to be. In the mountain there are lots of dangerous way's that 1 wrong move 1 wrong steps his life can be gone. In the luxuriant forest hide many a deep gorge where raging torrents rush down from the heights above and whose waters must be traversed. The whole mountain covered with dense jungle up to about 8,500 feet, and of course we all know that in the mountain are there are lots of wild animals. Jake stay their at one week hunting foods to survive and searching the treasure. In other side Mike who from in Cagayan also arrived their 3days ago after jake was arrived. Mike was handsome,strong and really brave person he also wanted to get the treasure, of course thats why he came through the mountain too. Both of them don't know each other, the two boys who finding the treasure really wants to get it. Weeks pass they don't found it but they encounter kinds of dangerous challenges like how to pass the raging torrents, the wild animals wanting to eat them, and unexpectedly Jake was bite by a snake he didn't careful so his life is on danger now, he can't moved and feel at sleep. But a minute ago Mike was pass by and saw Jake lying down at the bark of a tree he also saw the snake beside Jake so he was thinking that the guy was bitten by that snake so he look the guy and it was unconscious so he tried to save the life the guy and in god guide he do it and a hour pass Jake awake and he say thank you to Mike for saving his life and from that they become friends and finding the treasure together but after a year they loose to found the treasure so they decided to went home but they look terrible with their beards. they look so old. And after they where home they still communicating each other and decided to build a company with their own because this two guys are already rich before they decided to hunt the treasure in Mount Apo and they become a real good partners in business and in personal life and when they are so old to continue manage on their company they decided to render their business to there children and they realize that the real treasure they found is their long life friendship.
This is about a treasure, what is a real treasure we found in any adventure? for me the treasure we surely found in any adventure that no mans can steal it is our friendship to other person or to specify it our best friends is our real treasure.
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